I'll be 100% honest, it's alright for what I've read so far, its not horrible if that's what your asking, but its alright as is, I would comment on the plot/story line, but the comic isn't long enough to give a comment so far, but it seems to be heading in a fine direction at the moment.
I think she's very cute... However, I don't think she has enough flaws in her personality. I think if you developed her a little bit more, it would be better. I think it's because I see a lot of you in Lolli, so that's why she needs more development as a character.