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:iconsage-of-winds:
okay....Here's what I came up with, sorry for the sketchiness xD;
Yeah, it's a bit different from her old outfits, but eh, I love trying out new things.
I'm not so sure about her hat and vest, it makes her look too gangsta/punkish to me....I dunno though xD;
Tell me what you guys think.
The advanced critique is for her outfit, not how "well" this was drawn
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:iconjoshing3the7kokiri:
Candy on the shirt...? Now I KNOW you're just teasing me. >.< Who can resist candy, eh?
Lots of bright colors and odd styles that aren't remotely common where I live. >.> Kinda scary, for some reason or another.
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:iconluisarafidi:
It looks cool, but you have to consider that no one would walk in the street dressed like that. I love the hat, hair and her little jacket. But the rest is too colorful and too many details. You see, she's wearing three socks! I say try to make this one design less "detailed", you know?
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:iconhoshika-pichu:
There seems to be too much gray and dull colors, in my opinion. Lolli =/= Gray. :\

If every color became brighter, I think it would seem more like Lolli... or am i missing the point of the new outfit? ._.;
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*Sage-of-Winds Sep 19, 2008  Professional Digital Artist
yeah, I'm also beginning to think that the grays are kind of making her personality not so bubbly...
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:iconblue-shadow24:
Ohh colorful! I really like her shirt and the hat is really cute... niot too sure about the frilly stockings though.... they seem a bit... i don't know... much.
Other than that her outfit look good :D
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~blackcat56678 Sep 19, 2008  Hobbyist General Artist
ooo i love her clothes
and the colours are so pretty!
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~zelda-lover Sep 19, 2008  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I LOVE this outfit! It describes her completely >w< Lively, colorful, and sweet, too :3
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~Queen-of-the-Smileys Sep 18, 2008  Hobbyist General Artist
To be honest it looks like a bit too much.
Intersting concept though. :)
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:iconshingami-zao:
Wow,....any further with this and I think you can pull out your own line of "Lolli dolls"

I think it would give Barbie a run for her money LOL XD

but seriously...I like this...I like this allot...full of vibrant color.
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~Mahrahia Sep 18, 2008  Hobbyist General Artist
Gangsta/Punk isn't what I thought when I saw this. It kinda looks Decora (japanese style that involves lots of colors)
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